This poem is great.
And the art is truely awesome. But I feel that you you mainly showed just one of the symbols The Skull is what you mainly showed. You can see all of it. But with out knowing what symbols you were trying to portray you would not really be able to recognize the crow and the crown. I have an opinion you dont have to take my advice but I feel I should just say it. I personaly think that the skull should have a full crown for "glory and unconqurability." and the crow should be behind the skull with a full wingspan.
Anyways I liked this peice alot its really good props man. 9/10 4/5